This week we had received all the feedback from our drafts and began to take into account what our peers had responded. Most of the feedback was that are actors were rubbish and that the story line did not make any sense, also we had no continuity editing such as match on action, eye-line match etc which was vital to make the film more realistic and to increase the verisimilitude as BSR tend do. This was also very important as our themes have to come across serious and harsh and extreme as these were comments made by our target audience from our Vox pop.
Me and partner had carried on with creating the graphics and getting them ready to put onto IMovie once our sequence is completed. We had to change the graphics as we had changed the cast members and add the the jobs that the different crew members undertook. An important feedback we had received from our teacher and mentor was that the mum did not look like a mum so we had to then think of ways to change that issue. We had also continued with composing the soundtrack and creating various pieces of music that would match perfectly with our production.
We had altered the shooting script and treatment and narrative shape our new storyline, of still consisting of the smash mouth opening but later on into the sequence, we were able to recreate new ideas and think through all the shots we would include and we would achieve them. Me and partner had brainstormed ideas that would make the production more better such we tried out a number of shots between one another at different angles to see if there would a possibility of using that shot or angle in our film.
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