Production Log 9

For this week me and my partner had started to put all scenes together for our film, we had face an important issue that I our ending could be improved on the last week of production we had gone down to Forest Gate again to do last minute shooting in the estate flat which involved us shooting with our protagonist. We basically shot when Becca was outside the room banging on the door an extended it longer and we also included various angles that we could shoot becca from.
Another last minute issue we had to sort out was putting the diegetic sound over the credits which would make it more effective as the credits lasted long we wanted to make the audience feel they haven't been take away from the film. In addition to this me and my partner were given a voice recorder so we could record sounds of Jade being abused this strengthened the verisimilitude so we were glad we were given this advice from our mentor. Another issue we had to address was the credits, we had to add more credits into the film as our sequence was not long enough we had did this but i still regret not making the film long enough to use credits that appear on the scene with the character instead of appearing separately.

We had taken all audience feedback into account, improving our acting, which we had achieved, creating music that matched the film we had achieved, we had also included all the continuity editing to make the film flow. If you look at the draft and contrast it to the actual film you will see the difference in acting an editing and the sound and mise en scene.

Draft she is laughing not realistic 

Real opening sequence she is serious and not laughing as this is an important theme that we are representing.